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Every Dark Desire

1 rating: 1.0
A book by Fiona Zedde

Pleasure without limits... Desire without rules... Love without mercy... Naomi McElroy's life in Jamaica has always been about the comforts of family and home. But secretly, she yearns for something more. When she surrenders to seduction in a … see full wiki

Author: Fiona Zedde
Genre: Fiction, Vampires
Publisher: Kensington
1 review about Every Dark Desire

So much potential, so little return...

  • Nov 3, 2007
Rating:
+1
I love vampire novels. I love erotica novels. So how could I go wrong with a vampire/erotica novel? Easy. When there is too much erotica and not enough plot. I can't believe that I'm saying this but there was just WAY too much sex in this book! Rather... to much sex with a paper thin plot.

Fiona can write but I think she spent too much time in the bedroom of the other vampires and not enough on THEM. What little plot there was, was (sort of) good just not enough at all. If you are looking for an erotic novel and that's it, then this book is for you. If you want a story with a plot line that keeps you reading, then skip this book. There is a balance that you need if you going to write erotica with a plot.

Some books do it well, some books don't... this one didn't. Had it been penned as "erotic only" then I wouldn't have been so harsh. But if you're going to pen this as a story... then have some story.

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