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Every Dark Desire

A book by Fiona Zedde

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So much potential, so little return...

  • Nov 3, 2007
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I love vampire novels. I love erotica novels. So how could I go wrong with a vampire/erotica novel? Easy. When there is too much erotica and not enough plot. I can't believe that I'm saying this but there was just WAY too much sex in this book! Rather... to much sex with a paper thin plot.

Fiona can write but I think she spent too much time in the bedroom of the other vampires and not enough on THEM. What little plot there was, was (sort of) good just not enough at all. If you are looking for an erotic novel and that's it, then this book is for you. If you want a story with a plot line that keeps you reading, then skip this book. There is a balance that you need if you going to write erotica with a plot.

Some books do it well, some books don't... this one didn't. Had it been penned as "erotic only" then I wouldn't have been so harsh. But if you're going to pen this as a story... then have some story.

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Pleasure without limits...

Desire without rules...

Love without mercy...

Naomi McElroy's life in Jamaica has always been about the comforts of family and home. But secretly, she yearns for something more. When she surrenders to seduction in a jasmine-scented garden under a full moon, her life is changed forever. In that moment of complete ecstasy, Naomi becomes Belle, one of the undead whose carnal hungers are never sated...

Now Belle is part of a vampire clan, lost in an existence that strips away all pretenses and lays bare the deep, dark hungers within every soul. But first she must be taught. Through the feel of skin pressed against skin and the skilled manipulations of a powerful lover, Belle craves desire every waking moment. A part of her hates her new life, but another part revels in it--the savagery of her senses, the sway of her body, and the sensual decadence of her new family. What Belle finally feels is a sexual connection like no other she's experienced.

But in this exciting new world, there are many dangers that are best left untouched--and dangers that are too intoxicating and enticing to resist...

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ISBN-10: 0758217382
ISBN-13: 978-0758217387
Author: Fiona Zedde
Genre: Fiction, Vampires
Publisher: Kensington
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