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Entertaining, but not highly realistic

  • Aug 26, 2010
"The Sword" was an entertaining Christian fantasy set in our future after modern civilization has fallen. The target audience appeared to be Christian adults (both women and men), but some teens might like it.

The characters were varied, complex, and interesting, and I was curious about what would happen to them. The story was fast-paced and exciting, with the action rarely slowing. The suspense was created by the physical danger to the characters and the attraction between the two main characters even though they were divided in their beliefs. (And I thought the resolution of this difference was handled in a nice and convincing manner.)

The story was frequently unrealistic and inconsistent, and the characters acted in illogical ways. For example, two characters have a letter they desperately need to get to the prince and they know they can't get to him, yet they don't give it to a character that can and will see the prince. In the prologue, the author has a super-virus that--following his parameters and taking into account only the mail system--would have killed everyone in the world who received mail in less than four weeks, but he has it last for decades. And then he adds in a worldwide, nuclear war. Yet the world, several hundred years later, looks remarkably like a pagan medieval Europe with healthy humans and every pre-war plant and animal.

Also, taking into consideration the only religions they knew, it seemed like the characters were a little quick to follow this new god and trust that he was good. While the reader can see God working behind the scenes, the characters had very little evidence that he even existed. And their knowledge of him was based solely on the first few chapters of Genesis, some Psalms, and Ruth. When they asked God to do a miracle at a critical moment and he didn't, I find it hard to believe that any of the followers were willing to remain faithful in the face of immediate death. Granted, most of the followers did publicly deny their new god, but they still intended to secretly follow him.

The characters frequently prayed, sang hymns, and read Scripture, and this was done primarily in a "they prayed" way. There was no bad language. There were several seduction scenes, but the sex was implied rather than explicit. There were a couple explicit torture scenes, but they weren't gory, just violent. Overall, I'd still recommend this novel as entertaining, clean reading.

I received this book as a review copy from the publisher.

Reviewed by Debbie from Genre Reviews

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-Theologian and scholar Bryan Litfin has accomplished a rare feat-he has fashioned a land and time unique to any reader-s experience.-
-Jerry B. Jenkins, author, The Left Behind Series

-Some fiction is mere entertainment and some fiction is like a mirror in which we see ourselves and our world reflected in challenging and instructive ways. The Sword is a mirror of who we are at the core and what we struggle with in our non-fiction lives. Don-t miss this one. It is a compelling read that is well beyond mere entertainment.-
-Joseph M. Stowell, President, Cornerstone University

-Ever wonder about a world with an -almost-absence- of God? Theologian turned -futurist- Bryan Litfin provides us a compelling tale of the endurance of God-s amazing love-even to a distant remnant. Get your mind around The Sword. It could be the start of something big.-
-Mark Elfstrand, Executive Producer/Host, Morning Ride, Moody Radio, Chicago, Illinois

-Pulling us into the future to reveal the past, Bryan Litfin-s great what-if story discovers instead what is, laying bare the tendencies of the human soul, the strategies of our adversary, and the gentle sovereignty of the eternal God. In The Sword discovering truth is as exciting as discovering love, for, as Litfin skillfully portrays, they are one and the same.-
-Amy Rachel Peterson, author, Perpetua: A Bride, A Martyr, A Passion

--This text refers to theKindle Editionedition.
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ISBN-10: 1433509253
ISBN-13: 978-1433509254
Author: Bryan M. Litfin
Genre: Fantasy
Publisher: Crossway Books
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